Friday, May 7, 2010

poem

She enters the train
Looks around for a seat
Sees a vacant place among a row of men
Manages to push through the crowd to grab the seat
A man’s hand touches her left breast
She glances at him and quickly reverts her eyes to the seat awaiting her
Hoping silently that it is merely an accident
An accident she is now accustomed to
Really accustomed to?
She reaches for her seat,
Men to her right left and front
Adjusts into the bench
Finds herself shrinking a little
Moves away from the bald man on the right
Only to have that empty space taken up
By the expanding figure of the man on the right
And then, on the left…
And then, in the front…
Shrinking some more…
And some more…
Until she reaches the edge of the cold metal seat
With arms, legs, elbows and shoulders huddled up into a leap.
Finally, jumps to her feet to find another vacant seat.

7 comments:

  1. the allusion works perfect. that's really how we women have been marginalized. i love the spontaneity of your writing and yet the depth it conveys. :)

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  2. Its really wnderful to know that u write the things so well.Keep it up Hema

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  3. @ tina di
    @ neha
    @ mini thanks so much for ur comments n encouragement. i m so glad to hear from u all. have been a little irregular wid my posts n reply. will try n be as regular as possible. thanks again

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  4. I applaud your writing!!! So TRUE..So DEEP!

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  5. We see this too often in public transport system of this country.. I wish those men could read this and be ashamed of themselves..
    Great writing.. I Like the way you express daily life experiences.. wish I could write something like this..

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  6. @ deepak - i am glad u like my writing. keep reading n visiting...

    @ bhupesh - i m glad dat d sentiment gets conveyed through the poem. hope to see you around more.

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